Did you use any photographs? If you did, please post the link to the original photograph for us to compare.
Sorry to pester you, but 1) it is in the rules, and 2) some people have posted entirely too many pictures traced directly over photographs here recently, which could negatively impact the credit given to any artists. By complying to the rules, you help us to keep the good faith in artwork.

Okay the original photograph is from a magazine and I asure you I dod not trace it, I'll have to go back too eremita's house because I don't have a scaner
sorry for the inconviniace

Good drawing Medrano I like her expression in particular

Read the rules, please? They say that if you use a photo, you must post a link to the photo. If you cannot or won't - consider if this kind of work is appropriate for posting. It's that simple.

This is nothing personal, believe me; it's just we're being overrun by people who deliberately ignore the rules, we don't really need honest artist to do the same.

as I said before i will post the original photograph I will give it to my friend eremita to scan because I don't have a scaner and I'm at work but you'll be able to see it by the end of the day or tomorow morning

The expression is awsome!

very nice xpresion and clean style n_____n

I know this is not tracing, Mysefl scaned this drawing and is amazing in lighting and details.... Great Work Aldo!

Aw! Thank you so much! I'm really flattered!!! and this is so wonderfully drawn. Great work! And you get my max points.

That's great. Very expressive, lots of energy. Well done.

nice job, nice shading!

arenhaus BACK OFF!!!!
Medrano said he would post it
from now on every single member you harass I am saving the link and I am telling a MOD
you have a question or problem send the person an email or PM PLEASE you are not a MOD
this is humiliating to the author and you are beginning to sound like a broken record!
if you have that big of a problem contact a MOD your self
you are attacking every single Vector artist on this site
shame on you!

http://img111.exs.cx/img111/4134/photo9iv.jpg
Ok Here it is........ The Photo Reference I've used

Great Work Aldo!!

Medrano please PM Martin or one of the MOD's
he needs to chill! hes doing it to alot of people
I am sorry hes doing this to you

Great expression!! Well done

I did look at the picture you got this from, and I think it needs a lil more work more on the hair, if you want to practice (that is) but ove all I like your pencil strokes.
Now dont mind me Im just learning too.

Very nice! ^_^ I admire anyone who can handle their pencil so well. A nice subject too!

I think it's pretty fine, my only suggestion is if you see something a bit off in a photograph, don't be afraid to fix it in your drawing. Although you copied the eyes well, in a drawing it looks like she got something stuck in her right eye.

Not bad... I like your work, and agree with the crits above. +6/7

Very nice work Aldo....The smile is great!

Great job, I wish Ic ould sketch like this... anywaya great expression...

good work dude.